| "Sedition of Will" Reviews/Comments [ 41 ] |
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Title: Ch.s 6 and 7
Reviewed By: Cynbad146 On: May 20, 2006 23:53 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story just keeps getting better and better. Travel time with a "close" moment. Myoga pops in and drops his little time bomb;Sesshoumaru an uncle?! The pool scene sounded so beautiful and serene. Then a little bit of a history lesson on bitterness101. The best part was last. The intimate scene in the middle of the night. You threw in a little angst and a cliffhanger at the end when Sesshoumaru got cold feet. The story is cooking now and I am really hooked. I strongly suspect that you are not a novice at this writing thing. Have we read you before under a differ name? Regardless, it was great. Cynbad146
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Reviewed By: Alena [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2006 17:40 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I thoroughly enjoy Sess/Rin fics that keep them in character! When Sesshoumaru is tooo eager it makes it seem very childish and false. You're doing a great job! Update soon, you have me glued to my chair!
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Title: GREAT!!!!
Reviewed By: marithez On: May 20, 2006 16:23 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
one of the best sessrin fanfiction work ever!!! i just hope people would review more...i know lot of people out there appreciate work like this...pls review!!! keep up the good work
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Reviewed By: AWESOME On: May 20, 2006 15:23 PDT
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yes I do keep on reviewing because this is the greatest story ever!!! Thanks for the update! keep it coming
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Title: YAY
Reviewed By: Angel_fanficluva [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2006 18:43 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another update!! Your the greatest!! KEEP UP THE DAMN GREAT WORK!!
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Title: sessrinfan
Reviewed By: marithez On: May 19, 2006 15:34 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really like how you develop each character and very well written plus you update everyday. really love it. please continue...i just hope that you will finish the story...
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Title: i luv it!
Reviewed By: Angel_fanficluva [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2006 13:30 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't beleive i haven't reviwed yet! This story is very very well written! I absolutely love Sess/Rin pairings! and ur updates are coming so fast! Your the greatest! keep up the good work and update soon!
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Reviewed By: Kitsunesan nsi On: May 19, 2006 12:42 PDT
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YAY new chappie! i lUV IT!
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Reviewed By: Russanya [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2006 23:47 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story. Your attention to detail is exquisite. And not to mention, my favorite M/F pairing Sesshy/Rin. Please update often! I ejoy your work immensely
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Title: ch 4 and 5
Reviewed By: cynbad146 On: May 18, 2006 18:53 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like how you have written this story. . . so descriptive. It seemed so real in the garden scene. Two chapters - priceless. Cynbad146
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Reviewed By: Kitsunesan nsi On: May 18, 2006 17:21 PDT
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EEP! love it must add to faves.must add to faves. must add to faves. YAY!
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Title: Awesome!
Reviewed By: Nikkie23534 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 17, 2006 17:40 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOVE IT!!!!!!!!! Sess and Rin 4ever. Lady Kumiko is a very sweet character and a good friend for Rin, I like her. I even like Jakken (somewhat). Death to Naraku and Kagura! Off with their heads! Thanks for writing this story. Peace!
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Reviewed By: Miya Kino On: May 15, 2006 22:34 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I love this Fic alot, its really great too, keep up the good work, and please complete this fanfiction soon
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Reviewed By: Cynbad146 On: May 15, 2006 22:22 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! I am impressed with these three chapters. You write with a wonderful flair. The story really flows well. I can not wait to see what happens next. Everyone has had a taste of fighting attraction to another. Do not stop now. Cynbad146
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Reviewed By: Dragone On: May 15, 2006 20:23 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I sincerely hope that you'll keep writing and sharing more of this story. It's very rich with detail and Rin and Sesshoumaru seem very in character. I look forward to seeing where the story is going.
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