Reviewed By: ShoushiMitsukai On: October 29, 2006 01:38 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: This was a pretty cool fan fic! I think it could have used a lot more detail in it. It would have made the story a lot easier to follow, and more enjoying. Still, I like the whole concept of the story and it makes me happy.
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