| "Inuyasha gone ecchi" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Title: FUnny!
Reviewed By: badassmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2006 22:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Girl power! Deny him the sex until he BEGS for it, o yeah!
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Reviewed By: SeductressofWind On: September 20, 2006 20:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I thought it was a little short at first, but the ending was just too funny! And I never would have quessed English wasn't you're first language! I'm amazed, many people who are supposed to speak English don't speak it as well as you write it! Congradulations! And I must say, that was a very original story! Loved it!
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Title: OMB!!!
Reviewed By: Jalen On: June 16, 2006 23:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
HOLY HELL....WAT A BITCH....i actually feel...bad 4 him he luvs her...that wuz just purly wrong 2 do 2 tha poor Hanyou --_--
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Reviewed By: the bastard child On: May 15, 2006 22:24 CDT
Comment/Review:
oh my gosh... what a bitchy thing to do! talk about S&M. damn... poor guy. nicely done.
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Title: Excellent
Reviewed By: Cool Kid On: May 15, 2006 00:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
For english not being your first language you did a wonderful job on grammar and spelling. It was also very descriptive and enjoyable. You were also able to convey the sexual acts tastefully. a lot of authors tend to use dirty words for the male organ and female organ but you did it without going down that path and I salute you for it. Hope you continue to post more stories. Good Luck in future endeavors.
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