| "The Lesbian Fiancee" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Title: lesbian fiancee
Reviewed By: blackice [MediaMiner Member] On: October 28, 2006 17:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it is a good story to read and wonder if his or her new fiancee is going to try to keep ranma as a girl as much as possible.
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Reviewed By: Shadow Megatron [MediaMiner Member] On: May 25, 2006 00:16 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 2 of 10 Comment/Review:
Not impressed! This Yuri is barelly a step up from Akane! At least Yuri ADMTS to being a Lesbian? But she's definitelly got Kunoitis for sure And people mainly Akane accuse Ranma of being free with his hands? Sorry for saying this? The premis S interesting but it reads like a I hate Ranma's boy side so I will kill him off senario. Witch is NOT cool. As the other reveiwer stated it is kinda rigid. Your charaters are somewhat one dimentional. still ok but eally there is some groundwork yet to be undertaken. The Yuri charater is starting to be a bigger pervert than Happy another MINUS to the charater in itself is the fact when she finds out 'anko' is REALLY 'anma' she instantlly is 'ok' with it. Sheesh what a hypocryte unless she wants to make Male Ranma herr 'Gimp' that is (Another minus in my book) Anyway please keep working on this story as the interactions with the charaters are highlly unbelievible as of now even IN a ranma altraverse. This is not meant to be discouraging do not mind girl/girl too much just can't stand blatant male bashing against a charater that DOESN'T deserve it
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Reviewed By: Tuisto [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2006 22:58 CDT
Comment/Review:
Ranma and a lesbian fiancee? Oh MY!!! This story could really go places, BUT, the writing is rather rigid. Still good though.
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