| "Destiny" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: sailorunicorn [MediaMiner Member] On: October 05, 2006 21:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i am very impressed with this story...just look over your spellin and you are good! Cant wait 4 the next chapter!!!!^_^
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Title: unfulfilled
Reviewed By: ThePinkNinja7 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2006 16:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
T.T .... It made me sad that there wasn't enough detail to the lemon/lemons... I had high hopes... and kinda got shot down. I'm not trying to be rude! I'm just saying that i'm sad and wish there was more detail. It's good... but could be even better.
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Reviewed By: toasterwoman360 (not logged in) On: May 23, 2006 16:27 CDT
Comment/Review:
must read more!
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Reviewed By: Kitsunesan(nsi) On: May 15, 2006 14:43 CDT
Comment/Review:
I loved it. please contenue. i so toeatally want to read more. pleeeze contenue
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