"Bending The Rules Of A Heart" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Title: not bad Reviewed By: apples9191 On: June 28, 2006 05:01 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10 Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review: eh..it really needs editing, but otherwise, it's a good fic! update soon! but i wouldn't mind if you edited a bit first.
| Reviewed By: chibialex On: May 22, 2006 05:42 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 2 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 4 of 10 Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review: Good story and good pacing but there are a lot of grammer and spelling errors.
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