| "Death comes in many packages" Reviews/Comments [ 24 ] |
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Title: Chapter 6
Reviewed By: ptbear [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2006 15:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Unforseen with Souta and Kurama. Since Kurama is not available for Kagome pair her with Hiei unless she already is paired with Inuyasha. Update soon. Can't wait to see how Inuyasha is and what the fog is, probably Naraku's doing.
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Reviewed By: Kagome Lady of Darkness [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2006 11:47 CDT
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I really loved it! Keep up the great work and update asap please!
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Reviewed By: Fox Vixen not logged On: July 04, 2006 23:50 CDT
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*cries* Oh! Why?! WHy?! Sota&Kurama...*wails* Wha- What about Kurama&Kagome?!?!?!*rolling around on ground* What are you doing? WHy? WHy? What are you planning!! *cries* update! and tell me???!!!!!!!!!!!!!! =(
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Reviewed By: gcdv [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2006 21:48 CDT
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P.S. Is Kagome 18 n ppl think shes 24 or wut..? lol
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Reviewed By: gcdv [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2006 21:47 CDT
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WOW! UPDATE! HURRY! IF U WAIT TO LONG KAGOME WILL BE ALREADY DEAD!!!! lol, pertii plzzz.i loved ittttttt J'aime votre histoire! i think thats rite! lol, sry if it aint...lol
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Title: chapter 5
Reviewed By: ptbear@cableone.net On: July 02, 2006 19:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Interesting story. Update soon. Can't wait to see if the black fog in the future is the sam as in the past. If Kagome gets better and what happens when Inu meet YuYU gang.
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Title: Yip
Reviewed By: Speak_of_the_devil On: June 21, 2006 19:34 CDT
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YIP! IT IS COOL!UPDATE YOU BUM!!!
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Reviewed By: Kagome Lady of Darkness [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2006 15:25 CDT
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I really loved it! Keep up the great work and update asap please!
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Reviewed By: gcdv not logged in On: June 21, 2006 15:07 CDT
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i like it**************************************** just one question******************************** what happens next!******************************* heres another one******************************** when are u updating?!**************************** bye lol****************************************
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Reviewed By: FV(NL) On: June 21, 2006 00:29 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LUV IT UP DATE SOON!
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Reviewed By: kagome15 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2006 10:51 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please update ASAP!!!! GREAT STORY!!
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Reviewed By: Fox Vixen not logged On: June 09, 2006 17:04 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THIS IS GOOD VERY GOOD YOUR DOIN YOUR OWN THING TOO! I CAN'T WAIT FOR THE UPDATE.
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Reviewed By: Fox Vixen not logged On: June 09, 2006 15:57 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I luv your first chapter all the characters are bein themselves. Yes, this is very good.
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Reviewed By: ldychaos [MediaMiner Member] On: May 27, 2006 20:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good story line. Very original. I'm really enjoying it.
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Reviewed By: SmilingKitsune On: May 22, 2006 22:55 CDT
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This is a good story but I just have a question. Are you purposely changing the way the characters look and if so is there any meaning behind the changes? Otherwise this is a really good story so far, i can't wait to see what happens next. Keep it up.
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