| "Death comes in many packages" Reviews/Comments [ 24 ] |
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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2007 03:48 CST
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Nice story so far. Kurama/Souta was a shock, but very interesting. Are you going to pair Kagome up with Hiei? (I hope so! -- they're my favorite couple!! And this looks like it would be an awesome fic to showcase them in.) I hope you haven't abandoned this. Please write more!!
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Title: hello
Reviewed By: Mysterious_Tears [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2007 13:19 CST
Comment/Review:
YAYs!!! Love it!!! its starting to get really good!!! please update soon ^_^ Ja Ne ~Mysterious_Tears
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Title: Confused
Reviewed By: Vyncent [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2006 21:14 CST
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You describe Yusuke as having 'gold' eyes, Kuwabara has having 'green' hair, and Kurama as having 'Obsidian' hair. All of the anime, and in the manga, Yusuke has dark eyes, and both Kuwabara and Kurama have red hair. When did this change?
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Title: Death Comes In Many Packages
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2006 22:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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Title: Chapter 7
Reviewed By: ptbear [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2006 15:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome. Update again soon. Can't to see Kagome's reaction to Souta and Kurama, how Inuyasha is doing, and what the evil fog is and who it came from, probably Naraku.
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Title: Death Comes In Many Packages
Reviewed By: Sesshomaru's-Babygurl-n-v-me On: July 22, 2006 23:05 CDT
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OMFG wow it was unforseen with Souta and Kurama unepected but creative. Update soon. I wanna know whats happening. I wounder if ur gunna pair up Kagome with Yusuke? I mean it would make sence he doesnt know where hebelongs like he is a little unwanted, stuck if u will and she seems to attracted to those type of ppl (ie:Kouga-his pack died he donesnt have a place to go, Shippo-his family died too, Inuyahsa-half of both worlds like Yusuke and iz having the same problem and she fell in louve with him!) Well if i told u, u were doing a good job id b lieing....Cuz ur doing the BEST OF THE GREATEST n e one has eva known!!! So, update soon, bring the violence, wake Kagome the fuck up -she iz lazy enogh as it iz no need to give her a reason to b- and hook her up with Yusuke already!!! KEEP UP THE AMAZING WORK AND UPDATE!!! By tomorrow thanx ::Miroku's charming grin that always makes u say YES!::PLZ!!!!::puppy dog eyes and Inu's ears:: You KNOW u cant rezest!!
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Title: jeez
Reviewed By: Raizen(NLI) On: July 22, 2006 20:11 CDT
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Jeeez...i feel the love...
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Title: OMFG!!
Reviewed By: KawaiiKoneko89*not logged in* On: July 22, 2006 11:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story! Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: Fox Vixen not logged On: July 20, 2006 18:49 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is very good, very very good. I can't wait for the update. And I think Kagome/Kurama should find a way to hook up.
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Title: Chapter 6
Reviewed By: ptbear [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2006 15:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Unforseen with Souta and Kurama. Since Kurama is not available for Kagome pair her with Hiei unless she already is paired with Inuyasha. Update soon. Can't wait to see how Inuyasha is and what the fog is, probably Naraku's doing.
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Reviewed By: Kagome Lady of Darkness [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2006 11:47 CDT
Comment/Review:
I really loved it! Keep up the great work and update asap please!
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Reviewed By: Fox Vixen not logged On: July 04, 2006 23:50 CDT
Comment/Review:
*cries* Oh! Why?! WHy?! Sota&Kurama...*wails* Wha- What about Kurama&Kagome?!?!?!*rolling around on ground* What are you doing? WHy? WHy? What are you planning!! *cries* update! and tell me???!!!!!!!!!!!!!! =(
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Reviewed By: gcdv [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2006 21:48 CDT
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P.S. Is Kagome 18 n ppl think shes 24 or wut..? lol
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Reviewed By: gcdv [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2006 21:47 CDT
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WOW! UPDATE! HURRY! IF U WAIT TO LONG KAGOME WILL BE ALREADY DEAD!!!! lol, pertii plzzz.i loved ittttttt J'aime votre histoire! i think thats rite! lol, sry if it aint...lol
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Title: chapter 5
Reviewed By: ptbear@cableone.net On: July 02, 2006 19:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Interesting story. Update soon. Can't wait to see if the black fog in the future is the sam as in the past. If Kagome gets better and what happens when Inu meet YuYU gang.
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