| "Business as Usual" Reviews/Comments [ 13 ] |
Reviewed By: hiya24 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2007 23:49 CST
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I loved this, just wanted to let you know.
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Reviewed By: Chase65 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2007 12:33 CST
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really enjoyed this one - nice wrap up!!
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Title: ROY/RIZA!!!
Reviewed By: Alixi [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2006 15:44 CST
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OMG! ITS REALLY GOOD! I think it's pretty good as Lemon's go, and as lemon's go, YOURS IS GREAT! PLEASE WRITE MORE! You COULD do me a favor tho. Email me! I would love it if you would email me, and then read my fan-fic, the WhitFire alchemist, not the other one....
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Reviewed By: FaBzZ [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2006 10:40 CST
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Love this fic and the chapter was great!Hope you update soon.LaTeRzZ!!!
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Reviewed By: Chase65 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2006 20:49 CST
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handled quite nicely - thanks for the update!
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Reviewed By: vincents_lover_ffall [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2006 04:23 CDT
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Yaay! You updated! Thank you so much! He he, I havent actually read it yet but Im confident that it will be great (I always stick and paste my fan fics cause I go by net time) but Ill do another review once Ive read it...you dont mind do you? I really love the story so far though! Yaay! Im excited, I cant wait to read it!
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Reviewed By: vincents_lover_ffall [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2006 04:06 CDT
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This is really good! I want to know if Hawkeyes okay! When are you going to update? Because I really want to keep reading!
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Title: yummy royriza tension! i love it! (we all know they want each other bad!!)
Reviewed By: maid scarion [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2006 20:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hi! i love this story! i love royxriza, and i'm pretty picky about the fics i like, but this is great! (it must be if i'm taking the time to review it! i often don't bother.) the reason i gave spelling and grammar an 8 was because there are a few minor mistakes, but based on your writing as a whole, it would seem that it comes from fast typing and faster thinking. nothing major, really. everyone seems pretty in character to me; i've seen up to episode 18 of the anime so it's really only been the last five episodes that have had much of the military personnel, except for roy and hughes. i await the next chapter (im)patiently!!
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Reviewed By: Kasha-TheInuFreak [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2006 19:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very good story. I like it a lot. Please update soon, thank you.
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Title: EVIL
Reviewed By: DeronsDemonGurl On: June 02, 2006 09:55 CDT
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AAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH! You left a cliffhanger. What happens to Riza? Who hit her? So many questions so little time. I hope you update soon. I don't think I can wait much longer. Please update soon
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Reviewed By: nonny for Anonymous [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2006 03:15 CDT
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Cute. I enjoyed the addition of a half-brother. I can totally understand not wanting to sleep in an apartment with one. ^_^;; Granted, I'm talking about my sisters, but that's beside the point. Keep up the good work. I'll be looking forward to your update!
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Title: I do like it
Reviewed By: Amie (NSI) On: May 25, 2006 22:01 CDT
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I haven't read much FMA, and the only pairing I'm really interested in is Roy/Riza, so go you! I thought you could have tortured Mustang a bit longer about Nathaniel, though, unless this fic is only going to be a few more chaps in length. The scene where Roy kisses her was very well done and in character for Hawkeye. All around decent effort - please continue! Merci for writing!
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Reviewed By: Tory [MediaMiner Member] On: May 16, 2006 12:09 CDT
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This story was great, I loved it. You did a good job of writting it, though Riza wasn't always in her character forum...Anyways, I absolutly loved it. Keep it up and hurry with the next chapter, I'm ready for more. ^__^
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