"Life" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Reviewed By: frapp freck [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2006 19:02 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: Thank you, thank you, thank you, thank you!!!! i loved it!
| Reviewed By: Mirage [MediaMiner Member] On: May 25, 2006 22:56 CDT Comment/Review: hmm, the beginning is kind of...hmm, well, weird. it seems like you started from the middle, does that make sense? almost like there is no beginning. and inuyasha is a little ooc. but it was cute. i love kikyou's line about his lips on her... i'm misquoting, but you know what i mean. cute, ooc, but cute.
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