| "One Long Forgotten" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2009 05:31 CST
Comment/Review:
this is a good story, quick question though. why if it's been 500 years is shippo still a kit? i would be very worried if a child didnt grow an inch physically or mentally in 5 years and it's been 500.
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Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 28, 2008 14:03 CDT
Comment/Review:
another good story that needs updating. why is shippo still a kit if he's lived 500 years?
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Reviewed By: youkoslover [MediaMiner Member] On: September 10, 2006 16:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I THINK KAGOME SHOULD BE WITH HIEI AND SESSHOUMARU YA KNOW LIKE A LOVE TRAINGLE
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Reviewed By: kagome15 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2006 07:01 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please update soon!!! could u make the chapters alonger??? and i think the pairing should be kag/sess
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Reviewed By: Kaina On: May 15, 2006 22:38 CDT
Comment/Review:
This is an intesting story. As far as pairing Kagome - I think that it would be neat to put her with Sesshomaru. Can't wait to see what happens next.
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