Reviewed By: Trynia Merin On: May 16, 2006 09:44 CDT Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 8 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10 Overall Rating: 8 of 10
Comment/Review: Pretty good songfic.
Reviewed By: NJNLOLO On: May 15, 2006 23:03 CDT Comment/Review: If she's getting fucked by 3 guys at a time shouldn't Vegeta just say it isn't his kid?