| "Jay and Silent Bob Strike Back 1/2" Reviews/Comments [ 18 ] |
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Reviewed By: DemonWerewolf666 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2002 01:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOL! This is so frinkin' funny! |
Reviewed By: Pyro [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2002 22:54 CDT
Comment/Review:
ummm.... i dunno exactly what to say about it... i mean i could go one of 2 ways, either Hey great job keep it up.. or i could say something more for a lemon... oh here!
Nice job man, altho that ending was very disturbing... and i didnt know you played a stoner from jersey! lol... oh well... its good i guess.. thats all i can say without really knocking it... try to stray from the bi-sex stuff in this one... it might end up with someone *whistles innocently* going off the deep end and killing someone.. not mentioning any name here..... LMAO! |
Reviewed By: Kaden Z Fukuyama [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2002 21:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awesome if not sickly twisted and perverse. Brian you are as perverse as i am scary.... *shakes head* not to say i didn't like it. good fic |
Reviewed By: Teeg and Sean *Biggerstaff* On: April 09, 2002 01:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 4 of 10 Comment/Review:
Teeg: *Still blinking rather slowly* Uh...I shouldn't comment.
Sean: He deserves to be told the truth.
Teeg: But...But...*sniff*
Sean:Teeg...for me...?*Big puppy eyes and a charming smile*
Teeg: Uh...damn you and your cuteness! Okay...I gave you 10 on your style, because well....You have an intresting writing style. Normal...sorta with sound effects...*sweatdrop*
Sean:Teeg...*Eyebrow*
Teeg: Okay...The sound effects draw attention from the fic a tad.
Sean: That's my author...
Teeg: *Blushes* Okay...spelling....You confused me at parts...when the spelling mistake made it a total diffrent word. Like when you were all "You're my friend I hate to see you said" I'm was all...Umm...It's "sad" Right...RIGHT! And I was totally confused when you did this line:
“Dude, I know a great Japanese pizza place. It's run by another fiancée.” Brian said and Bob nodded excitedly.
Teeg: I was lost there...X_x I don't know what you meant...Is it something from Ranma or something...~~;
Sean:But you had good creativity.
Teeg: *Perks up* Yeah! I would have never guessed you'd do a cross over like this. But....The Brian being Shampoo's love intrest wasn't random. It's kinda predictable...First Jun...*Smiles scared* Uh...yeah...
Sean: But it was a weird random cross over none- the-less.
Teeg: *Makes a protective barrier* I didn't really enjoy this all that much... It was funny I must say, but...I don't know anything about Ranma 1/2 or what ever it is called. It confused me. Usually when a person writes fics...the write it so that if you haven't seen it before...You know the basic's by the end of the chapter or episode. I was highly confused. I didn't know what people looked like besides Ranma(from your picture) Silent Bob, Jay, and you. o.O It was funny at points, but I just don't get it at all. So, be kind and don't ask for another review...
Sean:At least do her that favor.
Teeg: Overall...I wouldn't want to read the next chapter...because it confuses me too much.
~Teeg and Sean~
Note: Please don't get all mad brian. I felt I needed to inform you. I enjoyed the rest of your fics so don't be all offended.
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Reviewed By: yamai daiken On: April 08, 2002 17:13 CDT
Comment/Review:
LOLOLOL!!! that was great!!! FUUUUUUNNNNNNY!Jay and silent bob... cant wait to see what their planning! |
Reviewed By: R80 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2002 00:04 CDT
Comment/Review:
yes, very disturbing. loved how the Kuno situation was further fucked up, and the gag abourt the plan and the readers.why not have the Kunos race Brian and the otehrs to get to their "loved ones?" That would make an interesting idea. okay, so i'm a chase-aholic |
Reviewed By: R80 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2002 23:44 CDT
Comment/Review:
Amy? As in the one from CHASING AMY?? rememebr, i never saw the J&SB movies. ukyo should be more violent. spekaing of violent, when do the Kunos find out the "joyous" news? |
Reviewed By: Mimi, Myself, & Iz. [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2002 12:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
More hilarious work! Love it! That part about Akane losing it over Ryoga being P-chan was something I wanted to read for a long time. Great work through out! Yeah! Brian and Shampoo!
The dialogue is wonderful! ...especially what comes out of Jay's mouth frequently. Now to fix whatever love Akane and Ranma have for each other! Great work!
Now I have to see the Strike Back movie! I'm a George Carlin fan as well! "You're doin it all wrong!"
I often wondered what would happen if Jay, Silent Bob, & Brian fell into Cursed Springs?
~ Jodi S.
"It's like you're Obi Wan Kenobi, I'm Han, he's Chewie, and we're all in that *CKED UP BAR!" |
Reviewed By: chichiri no miko [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2002 21:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is absolutely hilarious. I never would have imagined this type of crossover. It actually makes sense...in a wierd sorta way. Great fic. |
Reviewed By: Pyro [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2002 14:48 CST
Comment/Review:
Very nice Very nice... gee... for soem reason Jay reminds me of Megaman... but i dunno y tho.... oh well..... anyhow keep it up |
Reviewed By: Mimi, Myself, & Iz. [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2002 10:56 CST
Comment/Review:
Whoops I forgot to add more...
Great handling of the Ranma characters, especially when Jay and Silent Bob are around! Great work!
Sort of less 1 point on spelling, because there were some times it ruined the moment, but that is just minor. Overall awesome story this turned out to be! Really great fun!
~ Jodi S. |
Reviewed By: Mimi, Myself, & Iz. [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2002 10:54 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love it! Brian and Shampoo... (Awwwww. Heehee)~ Jodi S. |
Reviewed By: Kaden Z Fukuyama [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2002 15:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great. I'll like it better once I see Ramna. One of the few well done Mary-sue's I've seen. |
Reviewed By: Silva Noir [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2002 00:02 CST
Comment/Review:
well I know who Jay and Silent Bob are, but I've never seen Ranma, so I'm kinda lost. hehe. funny anyway. |
Reviewed By: GameGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2002 23:57 CST
Comment/Review:
Brian! You potty mouth! Anywho...intersesting fic as usual! Wish I saw I knew who SB and Jay were and saw Ranma so I knew what was goin' on. |
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