| "Daughter of the Forest" Reviews/Comments [ 56 ] |
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Reviewed By: chels On: February 16, 2007 16:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
At first I didn't know what was going on, I kept thinking wheres the demons, but then it all made sence. Even if it is loosely based off of a book I think you did it justice. Making midoriko the forest protecter was very smart and also tying in the story of the jewl with naraku and midoriko without really changing the original story was something I couldn't do. There was never a point where I was bored or even thought to stop reading and move on to something else. I think it would have been nice if kagome and Sango had actually saw eachother again or some meantion of that. Yet I really liked how you tied Kilala into the last little paragraph. And I knew it was Sango as soon as your meantioned Midoriko picking up the boomerang. Keep up the good writing Chels
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Title: beautiful
Reviewed By: admamj On: December 01, 2006 21:59 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
really beautiful story. thanks for writing it.
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Reviewed By: OrlandoLover [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2006 14:46 CST
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awwwwwww how cute...SAVE THE EARTH IT'S THE ONLY PLANET WITH CHOCOLATE...Cheers
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Reviewed By: WanderingAnariel [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2006 08:29 CST
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Sad it's over. ::sniff sniff:: BUT! it was a really good story. I liked it alot!
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Reviewed By: WanderingAnariel [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2006 00:46 CST
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Awww kaggie! It'll be ok. Inuyasha will save you! Great chapter! LOVE IT!
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Reviewed By: dudekiller [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2006 17:28 CST
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i really liked this chap. awesome job. please update soon.
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Reviewed By: OrlandoLover [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2006 16:38 CST
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awwwww poor kouga i like him, most of the time...update soon...SAVE THE EARTH IT'S THE ONLY PLANET WITH CHOCOLATE...Cheers
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Reviewed By: WanderingAnariel [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2006 12:35 CST
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Awwww Kaggie! Don't worry Inuyasha will protect you!
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Reviewed By: silverwolf halfbeast [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2006 05:06 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Man, Koga really got to learn that it is over but hes too dense. And I have a question, why didn't Kagome tell her real name to Inuyasha when she found out she can talk to him? Well hope you update and keep it up.
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Reviewed By: sessy_lover [MediaMiner Member] On: November 27, 2006 15:00 CST
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you updated !!! does happy dance lalala!!! sends wrriting vibes
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Reviewed By: OrlandoLover [MediaMiner Member] On: November 27, 2006 13:59 CST
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omg its great!!!...update soon...SAVE THE EARTH IT'S THE ONLY PLANET WITH CHOCOLATE...Cheers
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Reviewed By: WanderingAnariel [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2006 23:41 CST
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Hmmmm sneaky kouga... he's gonna regret that.....
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Reviewed By: evloner On: November 26, 2006 17:07 CST
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you may not know this, but the status of your story says completed. You should change the status to in progress. I read the story expecting it to be a completed tale and was very dissappointed to find out otherwise.
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Reviewed By: silverwolf halfbeast [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2006 12:24 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Man, he really is going to ask her to do that, wow. Well hope you update and keepin it up.
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Reviewed By: Inuhanyouchick [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2006 11:34 CST
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i like this story plz write more VERY soon!
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