| "Fate's Guardians" Reviews/Comments [ 15 ] |
Title: Chapter 9
Reviewed By: ptbear [MediaMiner Member] On: May 13, 2007 17:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome. Update soon. Can't wait to read what War found out, how you get Kagome with Hiei or Kurama, and what they do about Naraku.
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Title: I LOVE IT
Reviewed By: darkrosesept91 On: January 04, 2007 05:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i loved it can't wait to read the rest and my friends read it aswell and they rally loved and told me to let them read the rest so please write some more lol
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Reviewed By: Elemental_Dea [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2006 16:54 CST
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i love it!!!! very unique plot, odd things keep occuring, & it keeps you on the edge of your seet. please update soon!!!!! ^.^
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Reviewed By: angeltsuki [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2006 21:51 CDT
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what r teh parings? update.... pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeease
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Reviewed By: Fox Vixen(nl) On: July 23, 2006 15:19 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like your story very much and hope you update it soon. Can the pairing but Kurama/Kagome/Kuroune please!
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Title: Chapter 7(8)
Reviewed By: ptbear [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2006 13:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter. Update soon. Can't wait to see what happens with Youko and if he helps Kurama remember Kagome or any thing else that happened in the past.
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Reviewed By: angeltsuki (not logged in) On: July 16, 2006 21:57 CDT
Comment/Review:
YAY
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Title: Chapter 7
Reviewed By: ptbear@cableone.net On: July 08, 2006 22:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome. Like the way you brought Kuronue into the story. Update again soon. It will be interesting to read how you introduce Kuronue back with Kurama and Kagome's reaction to Alectos'friends. Still think Hiei or Kurama and now Kuronue. If nothing eles aternate endings with each or even combine them together.
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Title: chapter 6
Reviewed By: ptbear [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2006 18:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Interesting story. Update soon. Alecto/War would be perfect. Pair Kagome with Hiei or Kurama. Can't wait to see what Alector has to say to Kagome and what everyone thinks about it.
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Title: Very Interesting and Intriguing Storyline So Far!
Reviewed By: Vyncent [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2006 19:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Lots of mystery and intrigue. It certainly seems to keep the readers attention. I look forward to your next update. Your 'spacing' is not showing up, but that might have something to do with what word program you are using, the MediaMiner itself. Also, you might want to run a spell and grammar check. There are not many errors, however, there is the occasional place where there is a missing word, or the wrong word is used. Example: Women is the plural for more than one girl. Woman is the singular form.
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Title: Means?????
Reviewed By: Vyncent [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2006 18:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Just a question. At the bottom of your Prologue, and Chapter One, you have the following: Greek mythology - means Unceasing Hindu mythology - means "moon" in Sanskrit, used to refer to moon as a deity, also the name of a demon in Hindu legends Means "memory" in Greek Means "evil spirit" in Avestan. In Persian mythology Angra Mainyu was the god of darkness, death and destruction, the enemy of Ahura Mazda. The problem is that it seems you are trying to offer the definition or translation of something, but the something is not there. Example: "....means "evil spirit"..."?????
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Reviewed By: angeltsuki [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2006 13:04 CDT
Comment/Review:
I think it was a little short... oh well. Keep up the good work, plz update asap^^
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Reviewed By: angeltsuki [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2006 22:02 CDT
Comment/Review:
Neat fic =3 can't wait to read more^^
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Title: Fate's Guardians
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2006 15:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: gcdv [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2006 15:52 CDT
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PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!! PRETTY PLEASE WITH A SUGAR ON TOP- NO WAIT, I GOT SOMETHING BETTER. PRETTY PLEASE WITH A HUMMER LIMO ON THE SIDE. YEAH WUT...LOL
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