| "Apples [ Shikamaru x Temari ]" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Reviewed By: Shippos_sister_Kuzume [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2007 20:22 CDT
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again, I love the way you wrote that! These kinds of stories make me grin. A LOT. Again, so kawaii, 'the madwoman'. Ha, I'll add you to my favorites. You're an excellent writer, hope to see more! -^^- Ja!
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Title: OMG!!
Reviewed By: -Shortness- On: January 03, 2007 08:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow!! thats all I have to say!!! No... Not really!!! I loved it!!!! Its cute... short... and sweet!! You got Shika's personality down to the point perfectly!!!1 I really liked it!! Its also one of my favorite pairings!!! I loved how this came out and want to see more from you!!! I have a name on here but I just got it!! If you want to contact me my email is Ren_chan07@sbcglobal.net Great story!! I cannot waut for another!!!
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Reviewed By: SupersexyPooka [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2006 22:39 CST
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why dont u write more....u MUST write more
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Reviewed By: Sunshine and puppies On: July 14, 2006 02:17 CDT
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Take a look at your word choice. Nara wouldn't bound through the streets of Konoha. Doleful is defined as, "Filled with or expressing grief; mournful." Bad descriptor for Temari's voice.
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Reviewed By: You called it a one-shot...wrote like a series On: July 11, 2006 04:38 CDT
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ANGRY SO ANGRY! DREADMAN SMASH IF HE DONT GET MORE OF THIS SMASHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: anime_gal1 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 21, 2006 22:03 CDT
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This fic is GREAT u have 2 write another one, u write one of the best fan fics.I'm adding u to my favs and remember write a SEQUEL!!!!I still can't belive it's a one shot. :(
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Reviewed By: orangeflips [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2006 12:35 CDT
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That was really sweet. Temari, the madwoman, the woman Shikamaru fell in love with. Aha! Wonderful (:
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Reviewed By: konoha_kunoichi723 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2006 09:45 CDT
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OMG! THIS IS A GREAT FANCIC! PLZ WRITE MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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