"My Lolita" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: Ms_Senstive [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2006 22:27 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I loved how you made this into a poem like story. I was totaly suprised when Rin went overboard. Great story.
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Title: wow Reviewed By: inu4me On: May 28, 2006 14:12 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: WOW! this is anmazing story! Keep on writting, maybe an inuyasha kagome on....ya!
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Title: Oh YEAH! Reviewed By: Nikkie23534 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2006 16:04 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Very hot! I loved the story of 'Lolita' I think you did a good job!
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Reviewed By: Simonkal of Inu [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2006 19:10 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Well I'll be a dogs sweaty nuts! You did it again my friend...this was simply and utterly amazing from the beginning to the end. I don't really see as a pedophile thing because back then girls got married at 12 or 13, but hey this was freaking awesome.
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Title: Cool :) Reviewed By: Mihaela On: May 20, 2006 14:47 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: That was one of the best stories I've ever read. Great going!
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