| "The Dance" Reviews/Comments [ 13 ] |
Title: Excellent!
Reviewed By: hyperteenager On: July 25, 2008 15:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was an overall fantastic story. I remember reading this a long time ago, but finding it again and reading it over just made me love it once again. The originality with this story is sheer genius, and the way you describe lust and desire is simply amazing! I felt drawn to this story, especially the controversy of emotions portrayed between Sasuke and Sakura. The status says it's in "Work in Progress". Was that a mistake or will there be more chapters? Let me know! I have a Fanfiction profile: www.fanfiction.net/~animegurl9164 You can PM me, or if you don't have an account, my email is displayed on the profile as well. Once again, great story!
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Reviewed By: Cherry 2000 On: February 17, 2008 03:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WHOA!!! SPICY!! hmmm I wonder when they will meet again (Sasuke and Sakura)..... And when they do if its at the tornament and Naruto falls for hinata almost the same way sasuke did for sakura. WOO!!! UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!!!!! i lurrve it!!!!!
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Reviewed By: DonutFiend [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2007 18:43 CST
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wow.. that was downright BEAUTIFUL. I don't think anyone has ever posted a fic about dancing. (at least none I've read) God, the emotions, the desire, AH! It was pure... jesus.. i am SPEECHLESS!
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Reviewed By: animegurl9164 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 05, 2006 22:48 CDT
Comment/Review:
wow that was hot AND sexy! lol wish you'd make a sequel!!!
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Reviewed By: Sakura123 On: July 05, 2006 23:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was a kick ass story. I loved reading and it had great writing, you definetly caught my attention. Very sexy and seductive. I havn't read a story like this here before so it was different and creative. I love how you put Sasuke and Sukura together like that with the chemistry spoken beautifully. Do not stop writing.
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Reviewed By: Kags101 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2006 18:32 CDT
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=O Please Please Please... I beg of you, make more chapters to this... I can't stand the thought of Sasuke just LEAVING like that, there must be an encore! I loved teh story, absolutely loved it. I swear, my heart is pounding right now! *sniff* So please... Please, for me? *puppy dog eyes*
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Reviewed By: Josie n the PCats [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2006 13:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PHENOMENAL!!!! I absolutely L0VE it! You caught my attention and held it fully until the end of the chapter. Please update soon! I must know what happens next ^^
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Reviewed By: jutsu_master12 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2006 19:50 CDT
Comment/Review:
whoa. tht was...AWESOME! keep writing ok? i'm dieing to know wht's gonna happen next
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Title: HOT!!!
Reviewed By: vixypixy_no9(not logged in) On: May 22, 2006 18:40 CDT
Comment/Review:
OMG!!!! That was hot. I listened to hips don't lie by shakira and I could imagine everything. *sweating* I want to be romanced like that!!! THAT WAS SOOOOO HOT!!!!! SEXY, SEDUCTIVE, TANTALIZING AND HOT!!!! HOLY MOTHER F!!! PLEASE *BEGS ON KNEES SOBBING* YOU'VE GOT TO FINISH THIS!!!! I CAN'T FUNCTION WITHOUT THE THOUGHT OF THIS!!!! AWESOME SMEXYNESS!!!
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Reviewed By: kane shi megami [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2006 17:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh for the love of god! What do I have to do around here to get you to add just a little bit more to that!!!! IT was wonderful, hypnotizing, great! I've already added you to my favorites.....so couldn't I please just get a little more???? :( I'll review it every day! ANYWAY, I loved the story, loved the chemistry and I loved how naruto was a bit jealous. Great story and great writing style. And very creative.
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Reviewed By: Morwen Re On: May 22, 2006 14:58 CDT
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oh my freaking god! that was hot! you have to write another chapter! you've got to! if you do, i'll give you a cookie!
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Reviewed By: konoha_kunoichi723 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2006 13:53 CDT
Comment/Review:
OMG! I LUV IT! IT"S AMAZING! PLZ WRITE MORE!
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Reviewed By: frizzy On: May 21, 2006 08:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love it!!!! i love it!!! i love it!!! it would have been better if there was more though.
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