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| "Turn of Events" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] | Title: It's ok
Reviewed By: HotsummerYami [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2004 22:47 CST
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Kool story. Very kool.....and.....yeah..
| Reviewed By: AWA to Jaded Rose On: April 17, 2003 21:08 CDT
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Sorry it's been a while. Anyway, I know I'm trying my best to not be rude and I think you're trying not to be rude too, and I understand where you're getting at about my stories and I know you're trying to help. But this is one of my older works I've done over a year ago, when I started writing, okay? I think I may have imprvoed a lot over the year, but hey, I know most people may have overlook script style stories cuz of the style it's done. I've done the useual style before, but I find more comfort here and my usual style SUCKS a lot more then what I'm writing now. Don't like my characters cuz YOU think they're "Mary Sues"? Well, THINK OF ME AS A FREAKIN' MARY SUE!!!! Mwhahahahaha!!! Okay, went a little overboard there. But it's your opinion on what you like my story or not. If you don't like my characters, plot, or all the little problems that you uesually see in other people's fics, then go read theirs and don't go compare theirs to mine and telling it to me. I know damn well I'm not perfect, but no one is after all, right Miss JR? The only ones who do think they're perfect, in my opinion, are pig-heads. Thank you very much for reading and understanding. Thanks, and have a great day/afternoon/evening. (whatever time it is you're reading it).
Ashley W.
aka
AngelWingAsh
ps: If you have ANY further questions or comments, send 'em to my e-mail: AngelWingAsh@aol.com | Reviewed By: Jaded Rose [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2003 15:35 CDT
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OK, first, don't use abbreviations in stories (the whole w/h thing for with).
Second: please, no more Mary Sues.
Third: this needs a LOT more description.
And, fourth: the whole thing with Crystal thinking about "oh, all that's left is Iori and the Digimon Kaiser . . . when he's GOOD." How did she exactly know that he was evil in the first place? And what's with the whole, "Oh, the first thing I need to think of when I make new friends is who could be my boyfriend?" | Reviewed By: LilShampoo [MediaMiner Member] On: May 17, 2002 16:13 CDT
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kool |
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