| "Jaden's Summer Job" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Title: BEST!
Reviewed By: jou-kaiba-mokie [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2006 18:03 CDT
Comment/Review:
best yugioh gx fic so far OMG update! I can't wait! for the nexy chapter!
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Reviewed By: Canten On: May 25, 2006 16:25 CDT
Comment/Review:
Wow this is an amazing story. I love it. Keep on writing it. I'm still in shock. I can't wait to find out what happens next. Canten
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Title: v son sayian
Reviewed By: v son sayian [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2006 22:10 CDT
Comment/Review:
it didn't seem like a filler to me, ^^ it had necessary info, and like you said it did advance the relationship..hmmm I wonder if jaden's going to get any interesting questions, XD ooo curious to how the last day's going to be... looking forward to the next chappy
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Reviewed By: v son sayian [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2006 21:51 CDT
Comment/Review:
^^ nice so far, it's very interesting, can't wait for an update!
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Reviewed By: DancingKirby [MediaMiner Member] On: May 21, 2006 07:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Jaden's name is spelled just like I spelled it right there. And you may want to change the color of ink this story's in. It hurt my eyes to read it! But this fic really does seem to have potential.
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