| "Forbidden Kagome" Reviews/Comments [ 58 ] |
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Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 28, 2008 17:11 CDT
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this is a good story so far, i hope you update it soon
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Reviewed By: Jaisa Rael [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2008 21:32 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi I really like this story. I think Kurama should pair with Yukina.
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Reviewed By: Sessy'sgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2008 00:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is really fun to read, please finnish it.
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Reviewed By: MarsStarlight [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2008 21:30 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed reading your story so far I hope you are able to update again soon. I would like to see where this can go, you are off to a great start so far.
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Reviewed By: beth a reis On: December 11, 2007 22:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
can you up date a.s.a.p so we can see wat hapin to kagome and sota as well weth inuyasha and the gange th finde that kagome is note there at the moment and uyskay and the spiret detaktives nowe of kagome and sota's sekret
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Reviewed By: Nyuka [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2007 19:11 CST
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Loovvvvve this story I love that Kagome is like super powerfull love fics like that hope to see the is updated in the nearest future
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Reviewed By: Sakura Dimentia Winner [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2007 19:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i JUST READ THE SEVENTH CHAPTER OF THIS STORY AND WAS LAUGHING MY ASS OFF THE WHOLE TIME I STILL CAN'T CATCH MY BREATH. THAT PART ABOUT YUSUKE GETIING HIS ASS BEAT BY KAGOME WAS JUST TOO HILARIOUS. i CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT INSTALLMENT. I can't wait to find out what the scores are for the rest of the tests that Kagome and Souta take. I wondewr who Souta is gonna be paired with???? I love this story and cant' wait for the next cappie. Sayonara Sakura Maxwell-Minamino
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Reviewed By: Sakura Dimentia Winner [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2007 18:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was just rereading your story and thought I'd see if I could get this review to you even though I've only read up to the chapter hwere you comment on the mistake so yeah I though you miht like to know as to wher they got the idea for you having made the mistake in height. I've copied and pasted those sections specifically so you can see. I don't want to sound like bitch although I know perfectly well that I am One. I do know what that is lke though. My cousin is only 14 and is 6'4" Though his fatheher(my uncle) is 6'2" and his mother is5'11" whuich sucks cause I'm only 5'2" - 5'4" depending on which dojo im exiting. The excerpts are below. Sayonara. Sakura Seijuro Son Togashi Minamino aka TaiYokai Meiinu Inuraku Hiisho Ryuu Togashi aka Sakura Maxwell-Minamino 1. Souta, a boy of 12 years and 6'5", came running outside, right behind his grandfather. What he saw made him gasp as tears of silent fury came to his eyes. He knew what had happened. 2. Souta, instead of shrinking like his sister, grew from 4'6" to 6'0". Sangi mentally groaned. She hated to go shopping for clothes. His hair had turned from a dark brown to a deep, blood red, and it stood up like it had just gotten out of shock therapy.
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Reviewed By: SISTERINLAW19 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 03, 2007 17:48 CDT
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Wow I forgot all about this fic but You came back wiht a good one but can you please please please please tell the secret next time
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Reviewed By: i wear black deal with it [MediaMiner Member] On: October 03, 2007 14:02 CDT
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update soon, i love ur story
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Reviewed By: Jaenelle Angeline [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2007 19:29 CDT
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I love your story and i cant wait for the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: Brightshadow4494 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2007 21:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please update. Love your story!
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Reviewed By: Brightshadow4494 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2007 22:16 CDT
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please update. I am dieing of anticipation and i need to know what happens. The pairings are hard to choose but i think you should make a made up character or someone who knows both the yuyu gang and the inu gang.
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Reviewed By: kikyo hater28 On: June 09, 2007 19:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love the fact that kagome is extremely powerful!!!!!!!!!!!!!! please update!!!!!!!11
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Reviewed By: SISTERINLAW19 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2007 14:06 CDT
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are youn gonna update anytime soon?
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