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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: December 25, 2006 14:03 EST
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Wow! Thanks for the Christmas present! It's one of the best things i got. Fabulous chapter! So much information was revealed -- just love it! Also loved the interaction between Kagome and Kurama, too, of course. And still love Sess being so protective of her. I can't wait for more! You're terrific!
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Reviewed By: Devilangel620 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 25, 2006 13:28 EST
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:] thx for updating this!
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Reviewed By: Fox_Hanyou On: November 12, 2006 22:04 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i seriously dont know y ppl havent reviewed u more! this is one of the best i've seen so far! and i love how Kamanui (sp?) acts *huggles little silver kit* oooh u soo cute!!!! *realizes what she's doing and drops the confused kit* uhhhh... im sry?? kit: -_-;.......... lol update when u can! Dessy
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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2006 12:30 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay! I was so glad to see a new chapter. Gee, what a busy life she leads. Even dinner can be an event. Still can't wait to meet the other trainers. Still hoping for Hiei/Kag -- he sure seems to make himself stand out, doesn't he? Hope you get a chance to write more soon!
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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2006 07:39 EST
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Just re-read this! Still love it! I hope you add to it soon.
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Reviewed By: shadowwolf88 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2006 04:39 EST
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WoW!you have a good story line. Your spelling and grammar could use some work, but other than that good job. I was woundering if you could put in a part where yuske (sp) is in his full demon form.(Ilove that side of him) I don't know he could be having a hard fight with one of his trainers.
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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2006 02:10 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, I REALLY like this story!! Great plot device, nice use of background history, great characterizations! I can't wait to see who all of the demon trianers are! I do have to put in a plug for hiei/Kagome, though. The way you've set up their part of the story seems very condusive to pairing. Of course, Kag/Kur is pretty good, too. Heck, she's so cool, she should get them both! I hope she has a suitor or 2 among the trainers as well. Can't wait to find out what happened to Inuyasha and group. I hope you get a chance to update soon -- this is great!
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Reviewed By: kizuna4me [MediaMiner Member] On: October 03, 2006 23:26 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
more please more please more please, oh yeah some of the words in the chapters before the latest one had some spelling errors. nothing big and it doesn't change the fact that your story is wonderful!!!! so no biggie. and if it means you updating more often, then just write it down as fast as you can and who cares about spelling errors!!!
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Title: heya!!!
Reviewed By: Silent Miko Slayer [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2006 20:34 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well If your desperate.....all humor you lol just kiddin. You have written a very well done story but my only problem is.....HOW COULD YOU DO THAT TO SHIPPO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE SHIPPO HE'S THE FUCK'N COMIC RELIEF HE'S SHIPPO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! You just have to find a way to bring him back to life PLEASE!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Kagome Lady of the Rain [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2006 12:42 EDT
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I really loved it! Keep up the great work and update soon. :P
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Reviewed By: Devilangel620 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2006 08:32 EDT
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how can someone be mad and amused at the same time? that is so hard to understand. But Im glad this was updated.
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Reviewed By: Vandreador [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2006 04:11 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Great chap!!! Update soon..plz
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Reviewed By: Vandreador [MediaMiner Member] On: September 13, 2006 04:25 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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update fast!!! i need to know what is the relationship between keiko and kagome and sesshomaru's reaction!!!
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Reviewed By: babygirl20008 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 12, 2006 01:08 EDT
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i think this you are doing a wonderful job. I can't wait to you update again. hope to see ya soon
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Reviewed By: DYquem [MediaMiner Member] On: September 10, 2006 11:12 EDT
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I think the sword was made from a fang of Inuyasha. It makes the most sense for the name. Keep it up.
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