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Reviewed By: sesshys numba1 gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2008 15:58 CDT
Comment/Review:
awee why won't sasuke get help? i mean it must be hard 2 turn on ur only family but its for his own good!
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Reviewed By: sesshys numba1 gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2008 13:05 CDT
Comment/Review:
i totally loved the last chapter. what could be hotter than sasuke begging to get fucked?? lol update soon!!
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Title: That was betaed?
Reviewed By: Arie Date [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2007 18:24 CST
Comment/Review:
I like this story, I really do but the last chapter dosen't look betaed At ALL. It's like one GIANT run on sentance. It was incredibly hard to read. I had to beta it myself on my word program just to figure out what is was saying. Please correct the last chapter soon. I don't mean to sound like a bitch but I seriously spent an hour betaing that chap myself.
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Reviewed By: Addie777 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2007 20:09 CST
Comment/Review:
You're losing your space* God fucking damn it.
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Reviewed By: Addie777 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2007 20:08 CST
Comment/Review:
though Uchihacest* -.-;;
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Title: Hm . . .
Reviewed By: Addie777 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2007 20:08 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I enjoy this story. It's good. I like NaruSasu . . . even thought Uchihacest is my favorite! Anyway, I have one thing to complain about. Sorry . . But in the last chapter you didn't space out the paragraphs and when a new character is speaking. That makes it hard to read because your losing your place. Can you space out the paragraphs in your next chapter? Thanks.
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Reviewed By: The_12-Tailed_Foxy_Cat [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2007 07:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awesome dark fic is story sounds perfect cuz itachi does have a twisted dark perverted mind and sasuke is just his little toy poor sasuke -_-
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Title: please
Reviewed By: LunaEstrella [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2006 06:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
pleas update
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Reviewed By: blondebrat2006 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2006 21:52 CDT
Comment/Review:
update sooon plz.
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Reviewed By: twi-ster On: May 25, 2006 21:45 CDT
Comment/Review:
dark... but i like it update soon please
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