| "Threesome???" Reviews/Comments [ 13 ] |
Reviewed By: Cesia_Dalia [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2008 21:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
-gasp- That was awesome! delicious even. XD I'd love it if this was continued, or even a separate fic of Yusuke in his first heat. ^o^ I love those fics. Great job!
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Reviewed By: Cat Happy [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2007 17:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please please dont leave it there I would like more I cant stand it I want to know what will happen. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE, dont stop.
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Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2007 02:02 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow, heat huh? maybe
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Reviewed By: TheDemonQueen [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2007 20:49 CST
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I have to say I am entranced with the idea of Yusuke having his first heat... it would make the idea more interesting. You could add it to this story just having more of it, or it could be a sequel. I am not sure how much you would need to complete the idea of Yusuke's first Heat, but either way I would read it! Hope to hear something from you soon! Until next time, ja ne!
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Reviewed By: sesshys numba1 gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2007 16:10 CST
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wow that was a great lemon very hot
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Reviewed By: J0kEr [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2007 15:31 CST
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LOVED THE CHAPTER ALOT! Avout Yusuke being in Heat. I think you should somehow incorporate it into this story. It would be REALLY HOT!!!! I don't know maybe making his whole blood lust increase and maybe make demon come out it would be really Crazy. And maybe make Youko and Hiei in his demon form try to pleasure him. THAT WOULD BE CRAZY! and HOT! GREAT JOB ON THIS CHAPTER!!!!!1
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Title: Wow
Reviewed By: SirenNightMoon [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2007 04:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow this is a great fic!!! I can't wait for the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: sesshys numba1 gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2007 20:37 CST
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i like tha flashback b/c now i understand better update soon
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Reviewed By: J0kEr [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2007 22:03 CST
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That was HOT. The whole Hiei Yoko Yusuke threesome is enough to get excited. REALLY want to know what happens next so UPDATE SOON
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Reviewed By: TheDemonQueen [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2007 20:00 CST
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That is cruel and unusual punishment... that is just mean to leave it there... I really hope you update soon... I wanna know what happens! Until next time, ja ne!
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Reviewed By: sesshys numba1 gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2006 20:03 CST
Comment/Review:
ooo this is really good update soon!
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Title: hell yeah!!!
Reviewed By: DBDPsycho [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2006 00:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Holy shit! this was so fucking good! hahaha!!!!! WRITE MORE!!!!! heehee ::giggles:: that was so cool! (well cool in the sense of three out of the four were like 'playing' with each other heehee!!!! DBD Psycho Approved you better make more chapters.... this was fucking SWEET!!!!
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Title: Hello!
Reviewed By: AnimeRainChildOfLove [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2006 19:25 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was an cool beginging! Hope to read more!
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