| "Challenge to the Alpha" Reviews/Comments [ 19 ] |
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Reviewed By: I can't do it. On: August 08, 2010 03:45 CDT
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I am sorry I couldn't finish the story. Not because it's bad. I was enjoying it for a while, It's because Kagome seems..... really stupid in this story. This is not at all a flame. Because I just saw an episode where she was well...Stupid and I turned it off. I think you have her pegged pretty good with the mixed signals she gives Inuyasha. Ok I'll continue reading it.
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Reviewed By: alexus [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2007 15:04 CDT
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Great story, I think you should continue
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Title: sorry i spelled Know wrong hah
Reviewed By: angelofscreams96 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2007 13:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*know I love this story. lol
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Title: contiiinuuuuueeeee
Reviewed By: angelofscreams96 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2007 13:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutely love this story and I firmly believe that you should continue it. Everything is still developing really so to leave it now would leave many questions. Like about the rosary and more convos about that to come, and if and when they DO have children. things like that. I'm sure there are better examples but those are the two off of the top of my head at the moment. I just no that while I adore this story I wouldn't be satisfied with it if it ended here with the 'Back To The Well... ' chapter. I feel that you should definitely continue on because there is so much left that you can do with it.
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Reviewed By: adea neri On: April 18, 2007 00:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
sorry i havnet been updateing but i love this fic.
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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2007 19:23 CDT
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Hmmm. Cute chapter. I can't believe Inuyasha would sexually tease Kagome's friend like that. Seems out of character for him to be so flirty with ANYONE. Love the way Kag's mother kept interrupting them -- LOL!! Glad she took the news so well. The detail at the end about kagome not taking the beads off when he wants her to was a bit disturbing. She doesn't think that now that they are mated, his youkai would probably recognize her? You can certaily leave this at this point as a stand-alone story, if you want, or carry it on if you have a plotline in mind. Either way, nice job!
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Reviewed By: Kawaii-KeKe-Chan [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2007 13:55 CDT
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You have the makings of a great story here. However, i advise you to run a lil spell check or look over your work before posting it- for example, you wrote 'weekly' instead of 'weakly'- we all make mistakes, but frequent ones can put readers off, and i think it's a shame cos otherwise i'd want to go on reading! Good luck!
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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2007 05:19 CDT
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Wow! I just got to the last chapter and realized I hadn't read it or the previous one yet. Wonder what happened to my favorites alert? Oh well. Now I've read them, and they were awesome!! I absolutely loved the way you had Kagome get mad and let Kouga have it. I'm glad he isn't dead, but he deserved the punch. (Of course, Kagome did give him mixed signals which led to the whole mess. And all because of Inuyasha and Kikyou. Again. *sigh* At least now she knows that Inuyasha chooses her and loves her.) And then, things got even better, because Kagome got to face off with Kikyou and kill her. Yay! Loved how determined and tough you made her for that -- standing up with Makkura and Miroku's help and ripping the arrow out of her chest to send back at Kikyou. Terrific! Now, we have to make sure Kagome lives. and somehow, she's going to have to tell her Mom about her relationship with Inuyasha. Things will be horribly awkward around her family until they know the truth. Especially for her mate. This is a great story!! I've really been enjoying it.
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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2007 04:43 CDT
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I am in the process of re-reading this. I am still so impressed by the first several chapters. The events with Kouga and the wolves were mesmerizing. It's all very well-written, and just a great story. I love the originality of it. Excellent work!
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Reviewed By: inuluvver On: March 25, 2007 02:26 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg..if kagome dies... well.. lets just say that i wont be a very happy girl.. haha.. but wow.. you are a great writer and have a very nice writing style. i just hope its a happy ending that they so desperatly deserve
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Reviewed By: wudelfin [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2006 19:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this was a great view on koga!
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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2006 06:34 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Really good fic! Well-written. Your lemon was tastefully done, too. Looking forward to more of this one!
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Reviewed By: adea neri On: November 08, 2006 01:02 CST
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please update, im begging
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Reviewed By: sailor saturn [MediaMiner Member] On: August 11, 2006 13:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG OMG OMG!!! THIS STORY IS AMAZING!!! PLEASE UPDATE! also you shouldn't worry about how many reviws you have... if you were worried... people are lazy jerks if they dont review. keep writing this story i love it!
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Reviewed By: SadBrokenWings [MediaMiner Member] On: August 11, 2006 07:55 CDT
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I can't believe that there aren't more reviews for this story, I find it highly intriguing and I can't wait for more!
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