| "Betrayal's Gift" Reviews/Comments [ 28 ] |
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Reviewed By: LadyWolf [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2007 22:29 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!!!! Kags was nuts! She could have tried a another way first. Hitomi is little slow that she can't see why she wrong. I still think Naraku is apart of hitomi, just in her blood somehow. Well I hope Inuyasha can fix this now that he know a bit more. And I get Sessy but he could try more to help and not just give death all the damn time! Well hope you and your family feel better soon and thanks for the update even though you're still sick. Till next time.
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Reviewed By: LadyWolf [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2007 10:50 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Why is she mad at him!? And sessy can be a little slow too but aslong as everything comes together then it's all good. Update soon love this fic much!!!
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Reviewed By: LadyWolf [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2007 01:52 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY INU MADE HER HIS MATE!!! Oh but why didn't he just ask the jennie for help? Hmm well I can't wait to see what's next so please update soon as you can! HAPPY NEW YEAR AND MAY YOU AND YOURS HAVE MANY MORE!!!!!
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Reviewed By: xAznPurity [MediaMiner Member] On: January 03, 2007 18:45 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
>.< omg you gotta be joking -_-' you can't stop there!!! update please!!!
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Reviewed By: LadyWolf [MediaMiner Member] On: December 18, 2006 03:18 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That's what the bitch gets! Ya know at first I was like this girl is part naraku(still do) but now I also think that in the end she want to be love and not feel weak....just like Inu at one time. Yeah she bad knows but if Hotaru can believe in herself more the voice won't be so strong. But maybe I'm reading to much into it ne? Update when you can and be save this xmas
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Reviewed By: xAznPurity [nsi] On: December 17, 2006 22:52 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg omg omg >.< well i must still say that deva deserves it -.-' update soon!
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Reviewed By: LadyWolf [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2006 08:36 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Damn her I hope Inu will try to really help her now. And what about Sessy won't he know what to do with all this. Someone has to be able to help them out!!! Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: xAznPurity [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2006 20:43 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awe >.< what kind of game does hitomi think she's playing? geez anyways update soon! ^^
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Reviewed By: xAznPurity [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2006 23:14 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great chapter =] yummy haha that scene wass so hot! update soon!
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Reviewed By: xAznPurity [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2006 23:43 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great chapter update soon!
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Reviewed By: xAznPurity [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2006 11:41 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i loved both of the chapters and i really hope that you update soon!
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Reviewed By: sailor saturn [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2006 09:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is an amazing story! i love it! it's so different from everything i've read! keep up the awesome writing!
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Reviewed By: LadyWolf [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2006 03:57 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG you have to give me more!!! I can't just can't wait to see more!!!!!!!!!!!!! UPDATE!!!
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Reviewed By: Gateboy [MediaMiner Member] On: November 05, 2006 00:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I lvoe this please, I've read every chapter and am still reading. Please continue!!!!!!!!!! PLEASE! ^_^ Big fan Taka-Kun!
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Reviewed By: kilichan [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2006 19:19 CST
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:( This is too depressing. I don't think I can read this... Maybe if I knew what were this story was headed...
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