Title: review
Reviewed By: FEMALE_INUYASHA [MediaMiner Member] On: December 15, 2006 17:52 CST
Comment/Review:
Ok this is a good start but the only set back to this chapter is that there's nothing there just you describing what the main character looks like now. Sorry to sound mean but i'm trying really hard to not be too harsh. Please at least update soon so that we can hear more about this God of Death. By the way you've down a good job with what you have so far keep it up! FEMALE_INUYASHA
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