Title: Very cool!
Reviewed By: Azelle [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2006 22:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very interesting concept! I've never seen anyone use this aging from child to woman before in connection to her being revived by Tenseiga. Usually, people either let her continue to reach a mature age and then the aging process slows down, or find a way (i.e. magical plot-device) to have her become immortal to stay with Sesshoumaru. Yours seems the most realistic if they were truly connected via the sword. The only real fault I could find with it is that it could stand a thorough going over by a beta since there's a number of missing words, spelling errors, and whatnot.
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