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| "Number XIII" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Title: Hi
Reviewed By: Zack101 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2007 11:54 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hi, I loved the fact that axel was with someone else before he hit roxas....And the fact that you totaly added in how they met was unreal!...If you don't finish this fic..I'll GO NUTS!!!..Its a really amazing story...And I would love to see how you put it all together...PLEASE
| Reviewed By: WolfishSerenity On: July 01, 2006 16:43 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Heh, first to leave a review. Yay me. Eh, on the topic of your fan fic here, I have to say I enjoyed it. Though not one of the biggest Yaoi fans around, I do like romance fics. This one was more lighthearted and despite all attempts of seriousness, you knew (instinctually, accidentally, purposely...whatever) when to add a touch of comedy to the story to lighten the mood in all the right places. I can't say I'm sure whether you should make a sequel, or turn the one shot into a continuation, but I do reccommend going on with it if it's something you'd like to do. In my own opinion, I'd say go with a one-shot sequel. This one's ending seemed solid, yet at the same time hinting at there was more. And of course with every story, there is truly no end. Keep writing, good work! ~W.S. (Aka W.G.)
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