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| "I Failed You" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] | Title: oh my goodness
Reviewed By: FlameTwirler [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2007 02:47 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hmm...I think the title says it all. Oh my goodness. This is a rather realistic view of life in current day Tokyo, aside from all the conveniences. It wasn't something I'd really thought of before but now I'm sure the image will haunt my mind (just want you want to hear, right? haha). Seriously, it's a very poignant take. And I know it's meant to be short and open but a couple questions that left me hanging: I assume the wish was to turn human? That's my only guess but then why would he still have gold eyes so now I'm confused. And how did he get AIDS? I suppose the most obvious is the saddest but there's so many ways and with his not being from the era and probably not even knowing about it... Again, kudos.
| Title: ... wow.
Reviewed By: ____insert user here [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2007 02:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay, I am well aware that this happens to have been posted ten months ago (almost to the date...). But it is so beautiful, I can't help but need tell you this! From what I've read (which, I'll admit, is a bit limited), I have never come across a dying-human-Inuyasha. What you've written, though, is really touching... more so than most I've read or attempted writing myself (and probably more so than anything I've yet to see). Thank you for writing this... it's really excellent. I know it's been a long time, but thanks anyway.
| Reviewed By: pardonwink [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2006 21:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent. Very touching. Got a bit misty, I did. I look forward to seeing more stuff from you in the future!
| Reviewed By: KK On: August 03, 2006 13:04 CDT
Comment/Review:
That was so sad, I feel like crying, You reakky know how to express the fealings. Good Job! Love KK
| Reviewed By: Vandreador [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2006 00:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
U express the feelings very good!!! Hope u can write more fics soon!!!
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