| "Brought Together By Fate" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: The Master [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2006 09:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love chapter 1 and 2 they were great. Keep up the great work. You are a great author. Raye/Usagi and Kagome/Sango.
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Reviewed By: Dark Lord Tokunaga [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2006 22:21 CDT
Comment/Review:
Same.....
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Reviewed By: toasterwoman360 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2006 21:38 CDT
Comment/Review:
yay! an update!
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Reviewed By: Dark Lord Tokunaga [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2006 11:31 CDT
Comment/Review:
In return for reviewing my poem..... I review your fic.... Good opening but.... It's missing a few things... I dont find any probs with spelling or grammer(I cant spell) But its a good beginning that can be expanded upon in a lot of directions... That is a good beginning, not where there is one set path to follow.... Ther should be many paths... For me however, my path has been decided a long time ago..... The path of twilight.......
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Reviewed By: toasterwoman360 (not logged in) On: May 27, 2006 17:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
ooh...interesting so far!
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