| "Last Chance" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Title: hmm so so.
Reviewed By: hungrystorm On: July 27, 2008 03:59 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
theres to much talking, i like the story overall. isnt this supposed to be hentai? i see no lemons so far. not that im not dissapointed i say 7 :) out of 10 overall. i see a few grammer mistakes, its OKAY. so yea~..... sometimes i cant tell whoses syaoran or eriol, you know the conversation part? yea. so um. i like this fanfic how it isnt that cheesy.
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Title: I want more
Reviewed By: Lina A Rose [MediaMiner Member] On: September 20, 2006 12:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Please do hurry. I would like to know what happens next. Until then Ja! Rose-chan
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Reviewed By: Jewels On: July 04, 2006 21:52 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story. Very creative. I wonder what you next move is. Care to let me in? Well even if you don't I understand. And what is it with you authors no liking your work? It's crazy! Update soon or I just might have to find you.
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Reviewed By: Amaru On: July 04, 2006 13:39 CDT
Comment/Review:
Good story. You should update soon. It was a bit confusing at first but then it got better.
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Title: Sorry
Reviewed By: Vince weather style On: June 14, 2006 23:54 CDT
Comment/Review:
Sorry I didn't update the first time. I wansn't very sure of what to say. But I guess that's alright. I hope you forgive me. I'm not really good at this review thing. Anyway I really like the story and I woulnd't stop udating if I were you. The girl who updated before me seems really weird! I'd watch out for her. So anyway before I take up do much of your time please update.
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Reviewed By: Kikima On: June 14, 2006 23:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was a good start for a story. I really like it please continue to update. i'm counting on you!!!!! I wouldn't want to have to resort to threats!!! Cause I would!!!! Litlle sister it is imerative if you update. With me at college this is the only way to check u on you now update!!!!
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Title: NICE ONE!
Reviewed By: hend [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2006 10:33 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
im glad is not a sakuraeriol fanfic hehehe i was worried for a minuite there!hehehe!i like the pairing s/s and e/t but who are t/y?......... great story!PLS UPDATE SOON!GOOD LUCK!THANK YOU!HAVE A NICE DAY!GOD BLESS!
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Title: Nice
Reviewed By: Arenja-too-lazy-to-log-in On: May 28, 2006 12:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very nice, update soon, k? (I LOVE the patented Sakura stomps!)
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