Title: ummm Reviewed By: wildthundakat [MediaMiner Member] On: September 01, 2006 00:01 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10 Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review: i was surprised when i got to the third chappie and saw that the story was complete. it's so short, but i guess too long to be considered a one-shot if u put it together. ur story idea is an interesting one, but it felt like there was more story to tell. it was kind of hard to follow through the whole thing. but, it was interesting.
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