| "Slaves to Fate" Reviews/Comments [ 23 ] |
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Reviewed By: daydreamer99 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2006 20:11 CDT
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Um...what happened to Inuyasha?! Great chapter! I like the building up relationship between kags and sess. Making me totally jealous! ;-)
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Reviewed By: daydreamer99 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2006 22:37 CDT
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I can't wait for your next chapter! I love how you keep brining us back to the other characters and let us know what they are up to!
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Reviewed By: DemonQueen17 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2006 21:11 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like, I like. Two chapters in one day. I like the way this story is going. Kikyo is so evil in this story. It's a shame that Inuyasha is under her control. Will he ever break free of her 'hold'? He deserves 'someone more worthy' as Sesshomaru stated in chapter 6(unfortunately, it won't be Kagome). I look forward to reading more.
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Reviewed By: daydreamer99 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2006 22:01 CDT
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I love the explination! It fits perfectly. So I'm guessing that means that if the spirit leaves Kagome she dies? Poor Sess!
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Reviewed By: daydreamer99 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2006 18:37 CDT
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That was awesome!
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Reviewed By: DemonQueen17 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2006 13:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
My eyes are popping out and my jaw is dropping as I read the latest. Is it my imagination or is it that Naraku is Kagome's long lost brother in this story. This is very original in my opinion. I can't wait for the next chapter. Inuyasha, you idiot.
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Reviewed By: DemonQueen17 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2006 23:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like this story. I wonder what happens with Inuyasha, the puppy-eared idiot (hopefully, he doesn't stay with Kikyo; she's an imitation of her former self). He should feel guilty for hurting Kagome. It's good that you emphasized how much he hurt her. I look forward to the next chapter. ^_^
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Reviewed By: daydreamer99 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2006 22:54 CDT
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that last chapter was awesome. I hope you explain later what and why her "power" has suddenly come up. I like the imagery you put into her new appearance. Please update soon!!!!!
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Title: EXCELLENT!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: Nikkie23534 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2006 00:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The tenision is gettting pretty thick, I love it! Keep it up. B reading U!
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Reviewed By: Nikkie23534 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2006 19:04 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Keep it coming!~B reading U!
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Reviewed By: Nikkie23534 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2006 19:04 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Keep it coming!~B reading U!
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Reviewed By: Nikkie23534 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2006 19:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Just read the new chapter. Way to go baby!!!!!!!!!~B reading U soon!
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Title: Well done!!!
Reviewed By: Nikkie23534 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2006 09:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think your story is very well thought out and well written. Usally I don't read Sess/Kag stories, I'm set on Inu/Kag-Sess/Rin stories, but there was something about yours that got me! I'm adding to my favorites so I can keep up with it!-B reading U!
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Reviewed By: tsukinoodango [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2006 22:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like the storu so far keep it up it's really good
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Reviewed By: inu_luver_2004 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2006 22:33 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
It is very good, it has plot depth and the story line does seem like "a road less traveled" kind of thing. Over all I like it and hope to hear more soon.
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