| "Slaves to Fate" Reviews/Comments [ 23 ] |
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Reviewed By: Kadama Chrone On: September 03, 2009 14:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I truly wish you would pick back up on this story. It is wonderful and would love to know what ealse you are or were planing on doing with it.
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Title: SORRY
Reviewed By: Kacey CHeeka On: September 01, 2006 23:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
sorry i veiwed on the wrong story!!!!! ur is great keep it up!!!!! again sorry that last comment wasnt meant for this fic
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Title: WTF still
Reviewed By: Kacey Cheeka On: September 01, 2006 23:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
yeah i think u did cuz in her story which is 45 chapters she has a metal collar thingy on and the collar shocks her if she tries to take it off and she is in a slave center with a plexy glass so people can see her but she cant hear them. The king also says that he has to many and Vegeta agrees to take her. and him having his way with her is pretty much the same as urs but wayyyyyyyyy more details. probably the only thing original thats urs is the name Angel and the prologue. just read her story not that u havnt already its called Slave buy Vegeta_Goddess maybe look her up and read all the chapters. seriously!
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Reviewed By: daydreamer99 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2006 23:19 CDT
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cliffies are so bad! I can't remember now...you said this was a Kag/Sess fic right? I really love how this story is going!
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Reviewed By: invisblg9 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2006 14:59 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ohhhhh! I hate it when you leave those stupid cliffys! no fair. I am soo into your story and now it's driving me crazy knowing that i can't continue unless you update soon. PLEASE UP DATE!! i love your story!
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Reviewed By: DemonQueen17 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2006 13:02 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oooh, looks like Fluffy is jealous. Kagome does deserve an explanation from Inuyasha as to why he left with the clay miko. She is so evil. There has to be for him to get out of this 'marriage' other than death. There's gotta be a youkai or hanyou at this festival somewhere. Can't wait for the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: daydreamer99 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2006 23:22 CDT
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Jealousy is great on Sess. Update soon....
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Reviewed By: daydreamer99 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2006 09:18 CDT
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Again another great chapter! Update soon! Oh and thanks for the Inu update too! ;-)
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Reviewed By: daydreamer99 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2006 20:11 CDT
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Um...what happened to Inuyasha?! Great chapter! I like the building up relationship between kags and sess. Making me totally jealous! ;-)
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Reviewed By: daydreamer99 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2006 22:37 CDT
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I can't wait for your next chapter! I love how you keep brining us back to the other characters and let us know what they are up to!
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Reviewed By: DemonQueen17 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2006 21:11 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like, I like. Two chapters in one day. I like the way this story is going. Kikyo is so evil in this story. It's a shame that Inuyasha is under her control. Will he ever break free of her 'hold'? He deserves 'someone more worthy' as Sesshomaru stated in chapter 6(unfortunately, it won't be Kagome). I look forward to reading more.
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Reviewed By: daydreamer99 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2006 22:01 CDT
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I love the explination! It fits perfectly. So I'm guessing that means that if the spirit leaves Kagome she dies? Poor Sess!
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Reviewed By: daydreamer99 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2006 18:37 CDT
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That was awesome!
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Reviewed By: DemonQueen17 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2006 13:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
My eyes are popping out and my jaw is dropping as I read the latest. Is it my imagination or is it that Naraku is Kagome's long lost brother in this story. This is very original in my opinion. I can't wait for the next chapter. Inuyasha, you idiot.
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Reviewed By: DemonQueen17 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2006 23:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like this story. I wonder what happens with Inuyasha, the puppy-eared idiot (hopefully, he doesn't stay with Kikyo; she's an imitation of her former self). He should feel guilty for hurting Kagome. It's good that you emphasized how much he hurt her. I look forward to the next chapter. ^_^
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