| "Revenge of The Genetic Mistake" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Reviewed By: kung-fugirl On: March 01, 2009 19:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
write a bit more other than that the chapter is looking awesome update soon! ^-^
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Reviewed By: Bluefire03 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2006 10:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Really good so far, keep it up
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Reviewed By: inukid01 On: November 28, 2006 18:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please write more its getting good!
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Title: Dragonrider
Reviewed By: Pokemon Fan On: July 20, 2006 22:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. Seems like a great plot. Please continue. My dragon wants to read it too. Can you make it even more dramatic than the movie?
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Reviewed By: Tainted Rain On: July 08, 2006 01:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oooh...I can't wait to read some more of this fic! I just descovered this site today loooking for a Giovanni-rape-Ash fic (it had been stuck in my mind for days) and yours came up when I Googled it. Er, forgive me if I don't explain my ratings (right now I'm not functioning properly. me+explanations=XP) OMFG!! The sticks!! I loved Pikachu's twig! Yes, the little things amuse me. ;P Foo, I can't use the name Black Ice (I use it for most things.)
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Reviewed By: black arora On: June 24, 2006 07:45 CDT
Comment/Review:
A very good start, I suggest that you get someone else to look at your story before posting though. Spell check is sneaky and I noticed that although there were no big spelling errors, there were a few wrong words. Like picture instead of pick up and stir instead of stirring. Altogether believable characters and that is something that is hard to find in pokemon fanfics. The only thing I did not like was when Brock went to bed and you wrote 'err...closed his eyes.' Innuendo is one thing but this was just a tad to straight forward to be considered innuendo.
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Reviewed By: REALDAKANGEL On: June 17, 2006 16:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
i think this is a great start, sounds intertasing (sp?) and original. i cant really pass judgement til i've reat morethen one chappie, but i think this'll do great ^.^ please upate again soon, coz i really wanna know what happens next.
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Reviewed By: foxyval [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2006 02:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please! I'd like to read some more. This one sounds like it could be really good.
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