| "Four Girls and Four Boys Helping Them to Forget" Reviews/Comments [ 38 ] |
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Reviewed By: Kurenai Chinoumi [MediaMiner Member] On: September 08, 2006 21:44 EDT
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HELL YEAH!! GREAT CHAPTERS!!! ^_^ Update please! Thanks for updating too.
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Reviewed By: Kurenai Chinoumi [MediaMiner Member] On: September 08, 2006 21:42 EDT
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HELL YEAH!! GREAT CHAPTERS!! ^_^ Update please!! Thanks for updating by the way. JA NE!! (Ja ne: See you)
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Reviewed By: ClassicalTwist [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2006 14:10 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story! You capture the drama really well and I even cried during two of the chapters. Please, update soon! I'm excited to see what happens with everyone.
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Reviewed By: xPrincess Gothx [MediaMiner Member] On: August 27, 2006 07:25 EDT
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Pleez write more if been waiting 4 almost a month so pleez update
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Reviewed By: luv012 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2006 23:46 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this has got to be the most awesome fanfic i have ever read and i have read alot. PLEASE CONTINUE!!!
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Reviewed By: stupidcupid [MediaMiner Member] On: August 18, 2006 00:56 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story just keeps getting better! please update more if you can. And might I request you have some more erotic scenes? ^_~
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Reviewed By: frizzy197 On: August 15, 2006 15:36 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story. i'm awaiting next chap.
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Reviewed By: yuki bozu [MediaMiner Member] On: August 15, 2006 14:55 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ok Im going to comment again about how awesome you are. Your story is so cool and again, UDAYE ASAP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: yuki bozu [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2006 14:00 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!!!! I love it. please continue!!!!
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Reviewed By: redninja44 On: July 30, 2006 23:59 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
very good story lots of emotion in my opinyon update soon.
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Reviewed By: Dark Luna [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2006 18:00 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok, this story is good, but you spelled Neji wrong. Over all this story made me sad then happy then sad when the girls got beated up by their fathers.But then happy at the end.
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Title: WOW
Reviewed By: stupidcupid [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2006 00:50 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fan fic is amazing. Like brin_1 said, it's like you created an entirely new world. I like that about this story. Please write more to this story, it's just soo open at the end. You are such an amazing writer!
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Title: good job
Reviewed By: crzy4naruto On: July 14, 2006 18:48 EDT
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the story is very exiting and ther is no way you can figure out what's going to happen next and I love it. The oly complaint I have that it"s Neji not Neiji. Pls keep writing.:)
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Reviewed By: Kurenai Chinoumi [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2006 05:47 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, I really like it! It's original in my opinion and I like that about it. Keep up the great work!
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Title: I'm moved
Reviewed By: brin_1 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2006 18:22 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I found that it, gave more then just a story but a life that actually might have been lived. You write words that can make someone sad, happy, angry, excited, and much much more. You have a talent that many would want and crave. So please don't stop writing, your gift can encourage and enlighten people do to good in themsleves and ours. ... plus I would ever much like to see what happens next in this story (Four Girls and Four Boys Helping Them to Forget)
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