| "Four Girls and Four Boys Helping Them to Forget" Reviews/Comments [ 38 ] |
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Reviewed By: yuki bozu [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2006 14:00 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!!!! I love it. please continue!!!!
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Reviewed By: redninja44 On: July 30, 2006 23:59 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
very good story lots of emotion in my opinyon update soon.
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Reviewed By: Dark Luna [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2006 18:00 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok, this story is good, but you spelled Neji wrong. Over all this story made me sad then happy then sad when the girls got beated up by their fathers.But then happy at the end.
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Title: WOW
Reviewed By: stupidcupid [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2006 00:50 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fan fic is amazing. Like brin_1 said, it's like you created an entirely new world. I like that about this story. Please write more to this story, it's just soo open at the end. You are such an amazing writer!
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Title: good job
Reviewed By: crzy4naruto On: July 14, 2006 18:48 EDT
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the story is very exiting and ther is no way you can figure out what's going to happen next and I love it. The oly complaint I have that it"s Neji not Neiji. Pls keep writing.:)
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Reviewed By: Kurenai Chinoumi [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2006 05:47 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, I really like it! It's original in my opinion and I like that about it. Keep up the great work!
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Title: I'm moved
Reviewed By: brin_1 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2006 18:22 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I found that it, gave more then just a story but a life that actually might have been lived. You write words that can make someone sad, happy, angry, excited, and much much more. You have a talent that many would want and crave. So please don't stop writing, your gift can encourage and enlighten people do to good in themsleves and ours. ... plus I would ever much like to see what happens next in this story (Four Girls and Four Boys Helping Them to Forget)
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Reviewed By: fLcL_FFx_lovr [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2006 03:48 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awsome job!! write more!!!
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Title: O.o
Reviewed By: KakashiRulez [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2006 21:34 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow is all i can say... its is really a nice fic. keep it up! and the best thing is u update daily =D love it! (lol dont mind the spelling and grammar, lol its not that bad...)
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Title: I like it
Reviewed By: Arenja [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2006 21:20 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, I've been wanting to read something like this for a while. Long, but not too long. Drama that isn't overexagerated. Romence that comes into bloom in the end. You really brought out the best in the charactors and I envy that. I hope you update soon. I can tell that this isn't over yet. I enjoyed how you brought out the soft part of Sasuke and the strong part of Sakura, and still made her fragile. As I said, you brought out the best in the charactors. I'm going to check if you have other fics like this because I've been looking for writing like this. Basically put; you really can write amazing things and I hope you continue. Even more basically; UPDATE PLEASE!
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Title: WOOT
Reviewed By: go_80906 On: June 13, 2006 00:04 EDT
Comment/Review:
U should continue this i like this
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Reviewed By: theSKiEisFALLING [not logged in] On: June 11, 2006 01:36 EDT
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YAY!! please continue kude!!! me likey! WOOT!
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Reviewed By: sakedrunkdrinker On: June 07, 2006 21:15 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
alright that was great keep it up
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Reviewed By: sakedrunkdrinker On: June 04, 2006 19:15 EDT
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u r really good at this i just love this story okay BELIEVE IT!
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Reviewed By: nf.gjho On: June 04, 2006 18:42 EDT
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i love it plz continue its one of the best ive read in a long time
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