| "A Nearly Perfect Day" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] |
Reviewed By: DI24K3999 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2008 23:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great story, can't wait til the next chapter!
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Title: ^_-
Reviewed By: Korinn-Kun [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2007 09:25 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked the lemon, it have to congradulate you on that, it was good. But I don't like how you made Shika out to be. Just my personal oppinion. I still liked the idea, though, it was pretty original.
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Reviewed By: BUMBUMYEAH On: May 11, 2007 19:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMFG its good and a little weird cuz shika would never do that but good imagination though write more!!!!
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Title: Hehehe...
Reviewed By: Syrus Magistus [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2007 22:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oo0o0o0o0o!!! Temari's gonna get her ass plundered in the next chapter... that is, if you actually were to wrtie another chapter, which you probably won't since it's been a year. Too bad. What a waste...
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Title: WOW!
Reviewed By: LostInTheRain84 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2006 22:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW......... this was my first Temari and Shikamru pairing that I had ever read (though I've always liked the pairing)... a part of me feels extremely bad for Temari.... but then there's my perverted side who wants to tell you this is one of the best lemons I have ever read by far.... you so rule! and you're so creative... I would have never thought of a new shadow trick like that! Two thumbs up!! ^^ So keep writing for this story....
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Reviewed By: very pissed off On: September 28, 2006 19:10 CDT
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ARE YOU GOING TO UPDATE ANY TIME YEAR OR NOT?!?!?! IF NOT, THEN REMOVE THIS DAMN STORY!!!!
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Reviewed By: Just a fan On: September 08, 2006 14:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
The hentai in me wants you to keep writing The writer in me wants you to stop Maybe call it book two and keep going on with this idea? Temari becomes his kind of slave and if she doesn't do what he wants he can always just make her? If you don't add more I'll be forced to beg you for permission to carry it on.
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Reviewed By: no one important On: June 22, 2006 23:18 CDT
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your a sick person but i have to agree that is a very useful technique
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Reviewed By: no one important On: June 22, 2006 23:17 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
your a sick person but i have to agree that is a very useful technique
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