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"A blast from the ancient past, The gods most dangerous weopon returns!" Reviews/Comments [ 1 ]
 Reviewed By: dar master of doom [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 16, 2006 09:18 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10
Comment/Review:
so far it off to a good start but you need to staop using so many slang words. try useing real word that will make the story a lot better.

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