"Never Mended" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] | Reviewed By: Scream On: July 20, 2006 13:18 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: I enjoyed this fanfic a lot. It may be shorter than I would have liked, but it was still a wonderful story. I would really appreciate it if you continued it. I'd like to continue reading it.
| Reviewed By: combustion On: June 29, 2006 18:14 CDT Comment/Review: UPDATE UPDATE THAT WAS AWESOME
| Reviewed By: T-A-R21 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2006 15:26 CDT Comment/Review: Love your fic... hope you update soon :)
| Reviewed By: Haywire_Hakaze [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2006 12:59 CDT Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Comment/Review: This is off to a nice start. I don't have much to say at the moment since this fic is relatively new, but I can at least express my joy over your spelling and grammar. Wonderful. Also, I noticed Hughes is alive in this story. I won't ask how or why; it's not relevant to the plotline, I'm sure. But it's also something I can express joy at. Hughes was/is my favorite character. Ed's second; shocking, I know. BAH! I've side-tracked. At any rate, it's coming along nicely.
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