Title: Nice
Reviewed By: Linkin-Phoenix [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2007 22:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 4 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Not bad, I'd update this into prose instead of script based, I'd really like to see more detail, yeah... when it comes to the sex... Also, I would enjoy some more Yuugi/Anzu interaction. I'm not really an Otogi fan.. but well... I don't know why I like this, I prefer Yuugi/Anzu. But Anzu acting, well, like a slut, something strangly compelling. I'm a hentai, it's sad... Anyway, it's good, continue.
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