Title: Update
Reviewed By: gravilove19 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2006 23:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You actually update on three sites...so its hard to decide where to leave the review ^_^' but here you go. I really enjoy your story, and i hope you will update soon. I think the idea of Shuichi being dependant on tohma to be very interesting, and because of the past events, to be a good, not pairing, but cussion if you would call it. I like it that you used Tohma and not Hiro, because as much as I love Hiro, it just doesn't seem like he would understand. Yay for Ayaka haters, I don't like her. Hope you update soon, I would like to see if Yuki has changed any more than what we have seen so far. In a way this story kinda reminds me of Realities of Life, but then again not...(random >.
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