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| "Love me" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Title: >_
Reviewed By: Ebony & Ivory On: July 25, 2006 23:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 4 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 2 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
"trusted"? We think you mean "thrusted". That mis-spelling made us laugh our asses off. Anyway, to be blunt, that wasn't a very good fanfiction. It needs more description and easier to understand. Not only that, but put a line or two between each time someone new talks and each paragraph. The shower scene is used in many fanfictions. Try something more original.
| Title: cool!!
Reviewed By: Linw [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2006 08:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Comment/Review:
i like the story but it was short and there is not a real story line in it. but is is a good story only i would have liked it if you had just some more story line in it linw
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