Reviewed By: the bastard child On: June 02, 2006 15:38 CDT Comment/Review: that was a lame ending... inuyasha was ooc towards the end. not a bad story, but that was a bad ending. there was no conflict. inuyasha, passing up conflict? i don't think so. if you re-wrote it, and put in the fight everyone's waiting for, then leave the ending, that'd work out lovely.
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