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| "1986" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Reviewed By: TriannaKumira [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2010 10:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's very good, although the grammer and spelling needs some work. Also, characterization is off - just in the fact that you don't really show emotions and such. You focus too much on action (at least, that's what I think). In any case, it's a very interesting take on both FMA and 1984. Please update!
| Reviewed By: ReviewerWhoBegsForUpdates On: November 18, 2006 22:56 CST
Comment/Review:
I like. I never got around to reading 1986, I skipped the year it was required for. This fic seems very interesting though, and I look forward to reading more.
| Reviewed By: inu-kag15(nsi) On: July 30, 2006 15:41 CDT
Comment/Review:
I truly enjoyed the two chapters so far. I have read George's novels before but not this one. I am amazed that you haven't gotten any reviews yet, but never let that discourage you, it's an awesome story. Please continue! (Oh, you might want to edit a bit, there are a few silly mistakes here and there^.^)
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