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| "The True Lie I Never Believed" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] | Title: Not too shabby
Reviewed By: I3lue w0lf On: July 18, 2006 13:55 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's certainly the first of its kind! Lol, I foudn it pretty interesting, especially the Roy/Kagome fluffs! Keep up the good work! Update soon!
| Reviewed By: Nami_wave_101 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2006 01:27 CDT
Comment/Review:
Great story keep it up!
| Title: U SUCK
Reviewed By: biillay On: June 12, 2006 22:22 CDT
Comment/Review:
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| Reviewed By: darkenedsoul On: June 07, 2006 02:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i liked your story so far its really good and really interesting. please update soon!
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