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| "When a Plan Falls Apart" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] | Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 29, 2008 02:39 CST
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this was good, could you write a sequel? how does the rest of the host club feel about them being together? does haruhi get pregnant?
| Reviewed By: yeahjesse [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2007 22:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
With an uncommon blush she asked, "Was that...?" "My first time? Yes, it was." I really liked those lines. I've read your work on multiple occassions (on a bunch of different sites for a bunch of different series'), and I've yet to be dissappointed. I really like your lemons because they seem in character to the extent that the situations allow, and it's easy to imagine all of your words as I read them. Also, I remember your Haru/Mori one-shot, "Riders In A Storm," and I laugh because I like the Doors reference. I wonder if Mori would listen to the Doors... :p All-in-all, I like your style and am always impressed by how much work you produce. In all honesty, your writing ability is good enough that you could try to get an original work published someday. I can imagine really detailed scenerios of fanfics I'd like to write, but I find that I can't actually verbalize as nicely as they flow in my brain. I totally look up to you.
| Title: In a weird way...awww!
Reviewed By: otaku623 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2006 16:12 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this! It's so good, in an odd way; reading the story it doesn't seem like a Kyoya thing, but hey...it can be. This is one exploited part in the book...but it's good!
| Reviewed By: Sue On: December 02, 2006 14:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the way this was written. One of the best i've ever read. You should definatly write more. I loved it!
| Title: This story= love
Reviewed By: Ezri-Candy [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2006 17:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutely love this! I have recently been introduced to the greatness that is OHSHC by a friend of mine and have watched up to epi 17 of it (since thats as far as lunar has released it) and I'm eagerly awaiting more. I just started reading the fics for the serise yesterday and I just have to say that I love Haruhi with any of the boys...well, except hunny, hes just too cute to imagine paired with anyone other than Mori. I loved the idea of Haruhi being paired with Kyouya and you have this way of adding a certain 'hotness' to anything that you write! I love all of your works that I've read so far. I do have a challenge for this, but I'm not sure if you're still doing them and if its limited to oneshots. It involves haruhi and the twins... Anyway, excellent work!! Ezri-Candy
| Title: WOW
Reviewed By: Chrissy E E On: June 12, 2006 00:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this was great... almost like how i imagined it would be... except, in my mind it was more like a rape thing...heh... please dont think less of me cuz im not Psycho... thats just how i thought things would turn out. this was not half bad ^_^, i liked the way this was written.. very well done.
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