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| "Deepest Secrets" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Reviewed By: blondebrat2006 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2007 21:35 CST
Comment/Review:
this fic is really effin amazing. i really wanna read more. i looked at the date that u last updated & its been a while. update really, really soon. pleeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaaaaaaassssssssssseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!
| Title: So many emotions have been put in this story. It's excellent.
Reviewed By: Luv Shadow 14 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2007 19:41 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story! It brought out so many emotions in me: anger, fear (of what would happen next), laughter (especially at this part: "If you say so much as a mutter about what you may or may not have seen, Paris Malfoy, I will have you hexed so badly that St. Mungo's will be writing books for ages about your poor excuse for a body!" I don't know why, but that's just fucking hilarious!), sadness (I felt myself getting ready to cry many times), but most of all compassion. This is the most original story I've read so far involving the couple of Harry and Draco. I love the idea for the new common room and Dumbledore's trust in leaving them alone (*wiggles eyebrows*). They are such a... sexy couple, to say the least. And though there was no actual sex in this fic, it still was a beautiful story of two lovers and their lives of being shunned from society because of their choices. All in all, I gave this story a 10 average. If you must know for why I gave the other scores, here are my reasons: Style: 8 because, I don't know if the program you use recognizes paragraph breaks or not, but the paragraphs were smushed together, making it a little more confusing and harder to read. But I coped, and I'm glad I did. I was greatly rewarded. Spelling/Grammar: I am VERY strict on grammar and spelling; I'm a little bit of a grammar freak, it being my strongest point in English. I gave an 8 because of some of the way some of the sentences were set up and the choice of words. I found some slightly misspelled words, but above average from most stories I've read. I think you understand the rest of the ratings. Awesome story once again, and I can't wait 'til it's updated... It is gonna be updated, right? I'd die if it isn't... Please and thank you! Great job once again (Sorry if this review is a little hard to read... It's not my fault if the paragraphs are smushed... It does that on all my reviews and it pisses me off! I tried to separate the paragraphs, though, by using bold at the beginning, and apologize if that didn't work either.) ~Luv Shadow~
| Reviewed By: ChildofMyth [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2006 19:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! I just read all of the chapters and I think that story was wickedly awesome! It's about time someone put Harry and Draco together; and you did such a perfect job of it to. I absolutly loved it! I hope you contune writing, I'd like to see more of your stories. Plus, I'd love to see more about Harry and Draco (hint, hint ^_^). Anyway just wanted to say that I loved your fic and I think it was written awesomely. Please keep writting! ^_^
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