| "Sovereign Destiny" Reviews/Comments [ 39 ] |
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Title: awww
Reviewed By: mistress_yume [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2006 07:29 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that's cute! and i haven't read many stories that has a kag/koenma coupling...that is the coupling, isnt? or is it kag/kur and kurama has to fight a demi-god for kagome? because that would be interesting...
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Reviewed By: Kage Otome (Shadow Maiden-NSI) On: June 11, 2006 23:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've just started reading this and I must say this is very intriguing, I haven't seen a story quite like this before. I think you've captured the characters in a new light, especially Koenma, most people simply think of him as a weak character, but I wouldn't be surprised if he once was a spirit detective, he would no doubt be able to surpass Yusuke, being a demi-god and all. Hm...So this is a Kagome/Koenma? And what does she plan to do (the part where it states she would deceive and sacrifice her personal honor to do what needs to be done) and what does Koenma plan to do? Will they meet up anytime soon? And if they do how will the rest of them react to her? Has she had training (fighting and using her powers which would aid her)? Keep up the good work, I can't wait to read more, I must say you've caught my attention with this truly unique story.
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Reviewed By: KaoriKanna On: June 11, 2006 23:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really loved this chapter! I hope that Koenma's plan is a good one. I look forward to the next chapter! XD
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Reviewed By: kagomeme2000 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2006 09:18 CDT
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I Just want to say I love your Story and keep it up and update soon!!!
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Reviewed By: Anonymous0 On: June 09, 2006 02:28 CDT
Comment/Review:
Even though King Enma might thought he had planned this whole thing out perfectly, but there's someone who's a step ahead of him. Especially when it comes to helping his son and the ones he care about. Wonder if their is a group out their that's planning to out through King Enma out of his thrown? Although, I'm sure King Enma will know about it and will destory them before they could do anything. Unless it's someone he can't touch, without facing huge.... I'm hoping George (Jorge) is still alive and he somehow found someone (Koenma's mysterous rescuer)to who he could trust to help. Are any other demons care about what's been going on? What about the people who have spiritual powers, I'm sure they have been sensing something. Will Koenma have a a foggy memory of how he end up in the forest. Maybe a dream or something like that. Please update real soon. This is really great. Sorry for so many questions and ideas.
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Reviewed By: Fox Vixen not logged On: June 08, 2006 21:31 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story, but I'm not goin to lie. You made this a Koenma/Kagome!! PAIRING! There ain't to many...and I ain't no fan of em...But I here until the end. Update soon.
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Reviewed By: yue no rei (ff.net) On: June 07, 2006 03:56 CDT
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uwa! awesome start. now... just need kagome to meet up with the rekai tantei
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Reviewed By: alwayshiei [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2006 13:00 CDT
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This is great! Please, update soon!
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Title: Koolious
Reviewed By: Raina0624 On: June 03, 2006 14:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awsome. hope you make more soon. i got ya on my favorites.
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